The Flame

I see the candle burn on my table.  Flicker, flicker.  I see the orange flame as it gives smoke.  Flicker, flicker.  I watch as wax gets onto the table.  Flicker, flicker.  I cry as smoke gets in my eyes and burns.  Flicker, flicker.  I watch as the candle is getting small.  Flicker, flicker.  I start to wonder if it will go out.  Flicker, flicker.  I watch as the candle is almost done.  Flicker, flicker, gone.

I am Artemis27!!!

8 comments:

  1. oh my goodness. this was stellar.
    -jocee <3

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  2. A what? Hi, I'm new.

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  3. Nicely done Artemis! I love it.

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  4. I did this a few days ago. It just popped into my mind. I wrote a Haiku about Persephone too. Maybe I'll post that... >:) Oh, I am going to have lots of fun writing stuff in this place. I'll post my story tomorrow, when I'm supposed to write.

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  5. I'll go post the Persephone haiku.

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  6. I gotta admit, "Artemis27", I am seriously jealous of how well you can write. Bleh. Maybe I won't be a author on this page after all....

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  7. Posting a story today!!!

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