As of yet untitled song

It's not finished yet, clearly, but it's coming along and I'm proud of it :)

She could hold the sunlight
She could hold the moon
Sunlight's just too happy
The other fades to soon

Even in the starlight
You can feel her pain
When her tears fall to the ground
We just call it rain

Up above the clouds
Stars become a dress
Everybody's grieving
The life of the princess

She broke the sky
With a looking glass
And now the sun won't shine

She says she feels
Like a broken dream
But she'll promise you she's fine


  1. I really like it! It reminds me of a book called The Looking Glass Wars.

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    1. Is that a good "OH MY GOD"?